Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Watching Snow - Haiku

Snow fell softly
Unto the lashes, eyes
Cast up to the sky.

Thank you Barbara and Gay (Beachanny) for the tips. This haiku is closer to the traditional, Japanese form, but I fell short because my syllables are 4-6-5. I also reference nature and a season. I'm still working on it.

1 comment:

Brian Miller said...

delicate, i like...wish it would snow here...