tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post5778628792704106608..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: Willing To LoveKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-27047100747861935952013-05-30T08:14:22.702-07:002013-05-30T08:14:22.702-07:00So, broken hearts doe mend? :)So, broken hearts doe mend? :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-41288777200078115012013-05-30T06:31:55.523-07:002013-05-30T06:31:55.523-07:00Thanks Beachanny, I consider that a complement to ...Thanks Beachanny, I consider that a complement to be compared to Hemmingway.<br /><br />Thanks M. J. for reading and your positive feedbackKimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-46573801995035922272013-05-30T03:03:18.474-07:002013-05-30T03:03:18.474-07:00Such an intense and powerful journey...glad love w...Such an intense and powerful journey...glad love was found in the end. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-40744767576371858902013-05-29T16:15:00.661-07:002013-05-29T16:15:00.661-07:00A bit of Hemingway here - real, truth, and poetry....A bit of Hemingway here - real, truth, and poetry. Sweet wine, long nights and life a course that includes the stars.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-23320047524837239952013-05-29T10:32:59.497-07:002013-05-29T10:32:59.497-07:00Thanks RMP, I'm glad that the poem was able to...Thanks RMP, I'm glad that the poem was able to pull you in.<br /><br />Thanks Grace, I'm happy that you love the story. <br /><br />Thanks Penelope Jones, this poem made me teary eyed when I wrote it.<br /><br />Thanks Wolfsrosebud, it felt fair that there be a victory in the end, but I will consider exploring the reverse.<br /><br />Thanks Buddah, sorry to hear that this is the story of you life.<br /><br />Thanks Maggie Grace for the positive feedback.<br /><br />Thanks aka_andrea, I'm happy to hear that the poem resonated with something you have been exploring.<br /><br />Thanks Jeff, I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem.<br /><br />Thanks everyone for the positive feedback.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-41710890802929395242013-05-29T07:45:41.434-07:002013-05-29T07:45:41.434-07:00I think it is the rapidity of the pulse moves this...I think it is the rapidity of the pulse moves this piece so well, powerfully.<br /><br />There seems a touch of uncertainty in the most engaging relationships that make them all too fragile, subject to demolition at any moment. We're always on the verge.<br /><br />I enjoyed your poem.<br /><br />Cheers!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823532229269308280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-83002013779526871722013-05-29T05:52:10.365-07:002013-05-29T05:52:10.365-07:00oh, you captured this so well. I've recently b...oh, you captured this so well. I've recently been wondering, do we only get over one at the introduction of another...your ending lines touch that question for me.aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-90364748397183274082013-05-28T18:51:13.725-07:002013-05-28T18:51:13.725-07:00Beautiful story of grief and healing and letting g...Beautiful story of grief and healing and letting go. Brilliantly written!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-41887386929465248562013-05-28T18:32:36.070-07:002013-05-28T18:32:36.070-07:00As this is the story of my life, I can attest to i...As this is the story of my life, I can attest to its truth. You captured the loss, the pain, the change and finally the realization.<br /><br />This was a masterful story.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-10841462113646324272013-05-28T17:43:38.350-07:002013-05-28T17:43:38.350-07:00so complete... I loved the victory at the end... s...so complete... I loved the victory at the end... sometimes we are so blindWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-87552536852325496892013-05-28T17:21:50.065-07:002013-05-28T17:21:50.065-07:00you brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for shari...you brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750392266956265554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-42178728782229891112013-05-28T15:58:44.669-07:002013-05-28T15:58:44.669-07:00I love, love the story ~ Simple, yet meaningful ~...I love, love the story ~ Simple, yet meaningful ~ I like the turn from hope to despair, then numbing ache, then finally the realization to take a chance on love ~ The pain was gone, replaced by love ~ Beautiful share ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-34933612052945383112013-05-28T14:56:06.022-07:002013-05-28T14:56:06.022-07:00a very heartfelt and touching piece. I admit I he...a very heartfelt and touching piece. I admit I held my breath as I waited by the train, felt my heart plunge as unseeing the words were drowned, and the release as the wisps of burned paper carried away the last remnants of lost love. RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-67161379797176053252013-05-28T05:13:52.736-07:002013-05-28T05:13:52.736-07:00Thanks Hank, I wanted to see the point of view fro...Thanks Hank, I wanted to see the point of view from someone who was denied love from someone they loved.<br /><br />Thanks mindlovemisery, strangely enough I see some of my poems like movies while I write.<br /><br />Thanks Susan, it's true in the end time and the decision to move on is what heals a broken heart.<br /><br />Thanks Sherry Blue Sky, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.<br /><br />So true, Jim. I never thought of that way though. One person might pull away, but the other may be holding on. I would love to work that point of view through some more.<br /><br />Thanks Brian, I'm glad he tore it up, too. It is a major turning point to destroy the last thing connecting him to the woman who could not love him.<br /><br />Thanks LaTonya, I appreciate your positive feedback and I understand what you mean.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-62098797778337074492013-05-28T03:47:50.301-07:002013-05-28T03:47:50.301-07:00The pacing and rhythm. I felt the ache, loss, tend...The pacing and rhythm. I felt the ache, loss, tenderness and even the anger. Felt them without feeling you were trying too hard to convey them. Not exactly how I'd like to say what I mean but I hope it's understood. Thank you.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-14652690846309812892013-05-28T03:05:54.059-07:002013-05-28T03:05:54.059-07:00really nice story telling...def a moving tale...go...really nice story telling...def a moving tale...good on you for tearing it up...and finding your way...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-28825972175042411102013-05-27T21:26:09.361-07:002013-05-27T21:26:09.361-07:00"You come here, my love"
Nice write, I ..."You come here, my love"<br /><br />Nice write, I knew there was a reason.<br /><br />It generally takes two for a separation.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-60749876348342695952013-05-27T19:58:22.194-07:002013-05-27T19:58:22.194-07:00I so love this story - especially where he realize...I so love this story - especially where he realizes the woman in his bed is one who is willing to take a chance on love. Great story, so well told.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-60515630950590807672013-05-27T12:29:44.538-07:002013-05-27T12:29:44.538-07:00Beautifully told and moving. So many people try t...Beautifully told and moving. So many people try to help us heal, but in the end it is time and simply stopping in order to accept the goodness in our lives.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-5245429633893667852013-05-27T09:41:30.024-07:002013-05-27T09:41:30.024-07:00What a moving and passionate story I felt every wo...What a moving and passionate story I felt every word and I saw every moment as if a movie =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-60568057084460147742013-05-27T06:48:54.871-07:002013-05-27T06:48:54.871-07:00Unrequited love that wears one out is portent in a...Unrequited love that wears one out is portent in a negative way! A replacement is the most logical before one gets overwhelmed!. Truly often times, it's scary! Nicely Kimolisa!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-57962306279895748032013-05-27T05:59:58.531-07:002013-05-27T05:59:58.531-07:00Thanks Charleen and Robert for reading and your po...Thanks Charleen and Robert for reading and your positive feedback.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-36031150711572102002013-05-27T05:56:00.835-07:002013-05-27T05:56:00.835-07:00Wow.... my God Kimmy... I love this... I know exac...Wow.... my God Kimmy... I love this... I know exactly how this feels, so many ppl refused to take a chance on my love, either. Powerful is so right!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-11912689233465265932013-05-27T05:50:23.291-07:002013-05-27T05:50:23.291-07:00Wow! You made me almost cry! This is so powerful.Wow! You made me almost cry! This is so powerful.Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.com