tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post8500108348852960763..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: To GinnyKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-63039577553101306302013-05-29T10:34:40.215-07:002013-05-29T10:34:40.215-07:00Thanks Lisa Williams for reading, I think we get c...Thanks Lisa Williams for reading, I think we get caught up with the bigger themes in life and it's these little moments that trip us up and exposes our hearts.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-50032322310608653052013-05-27T16:30:14.680-07:002013-05-27T16:30:14.680-07:00What a touching poem, I have been in the same posi...What a touching poem, I have been in the same position, trying to comfort my daughters when they suffered heartbreak. It takes a very special dad to be there in this kind of situation, simply beautiful write. Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-87313947884999053782013-05-27T05:23:15.297-07:002013-05-27T05:23:15.297-07:00Thanks aka_andrea for reading,
That's true, ...Thanks aka_andrea for reading, <br /><br />That's true, Panchali, some problems come with solutions and the right intention is what really matter,<br /><br />I'm glad that this poem moved you, mindlovemisery. It actually brought me to tears when I wrote it. I love the poems that make me cry.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-16714227878777657232013-05-27T02:30:47.545-07:002013-05-27T02:30:47.545-07:00This is so touching, brought tears to my eyes, wha...This is so touching, brought tears to my eyes, what a tender moment you have captured in the midst of devastating heart breakAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-20461065484392793622013-05-26T22:06:45.174-07:002013-05-26T22:06:45.174-07:00What a soul-stirring piece of writing, Kimolisa......What a soul-stirring piece of writing, Kimolisa...<br />"I let her pain, leak into<br />Me, I may not have the<br />Right words, but I have<br />The right intention"---Oh, beautifully expressed!<br />I guess most of the problems come with a solution, the fact remains how we solve it and the right intention is all that matter.... :)))Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-81341134221150798102013-05-26T18:14:35.951-07:002013-05-26T18:14:35.951-07:00Well this just melted my heart, What a beautiful a...Well this just melted my heart, What a beautiful and aching piece.aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-205244103572400182013-05-26T18:08:09.078-07:002013-05-26T18:08:09.078-07:00Thanks Abruvanamedsly, I'm glad the line reson...Thanks Abruvanamedsly, I'm glad the line resonated with you.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-54501655991397249892013-05-26T16:45:00.835-07:002013-05-26T16:45:00.835-07:00I let her pain, leak into
Me, I may not have the
R...<i>I let her pain, leak into<br />Me, I may not have the<br />Right words, but I have<br />The right intention...</i><br /><br />...<i>I let her pain, leak into Me</i>...that line sunk into me as a reader...well penned piece of writing.Abruvanamedslyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00507963633079056567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-61096571913226918002013-05-26T14:21:52.160-07:002013-05-26T14:21:52.160-07:00I'm glad that both heartbreak and love came th...I'm glad that both heartbreak and love came through in this poem, I wanted to express the way a father would feel, especially when he is the only one who could offer comfort. Thanks for reading, MaryKimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-28503267901614709872013-05-26T12:59:25.625-07:002013-05-26T12:59:25.625-07:00This was both a poem of heartbreak and one of love...This was both a poem of heartbreak and one of love. Both emotions come through strongly. The ending was very touching, as the father takes his daughter off to bed. I am glad he comforted her as he did. As much as we would like, we cannot spare our children heartbreak....though we wish we could.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-64197940460982252362013-05-26T08:25:49.300-07:002013-05-26T08:25:49.300-07:00Thanks Buddah and I raise my glass to you too :DThanks Buddah and I raise my glass to you too :DKimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-69499228963095561442013-05-24T11:31:26.650-07:002013-05-24T11:31:26.650-07:00My dear, you've written a quiet masterpiece. ...My dear, you've written a quiet masterpiece. You embodied both character in this piece and made them come alive and made me feel their feelings.<br /><br />To Kimolisa, one of the best writers in the world <br /><br />(raising an imaginary glass for you)Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-57130120066641736812013-05-23T05:24:54.838-07:002013-05-23T05:24:54.838-07:00I think we all hope that children can retain their...I think we all hope that children can retain their innocence. I was curious to see that transition from the father's eyes.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-71784027189634798152013-05-18T04:28:43.794-07:002013-05-18T04:28:43.794-07:00ugh...i would hope the same of my children...that ...ugh...i would hope the same of my children...that they might retain their innocence longer than this world will allow...and the pain of the father in realizing they cant save them...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com