tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post4700714145295168211..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: And Every TimeKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-84501310183424213982013-07-01T06:05:08.069-07:002013-07-01T06:05:08.069-07:00What an interesting story you have woven...special...What an interesting story you have woven...specially loved the ending. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356682434301279963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-83444583375384486372013-06-30T17:50:06.053-07:002013-06-30T17:50:06.053-07:00what a dramatic, beautiful piece...the voices are ...what a dramatic, beautiful piece...the voices are hard to ignore sometimes. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416300760517862018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-45591180758408568512013-06-30T17:33:47.278-07:002013-06-30T17:33:47.278-07:00What an amazing poem. I, too, liked that she tried...What an amazing poem. I, too, liked that she tried to believe because everyone else said to. The ending is dramatic. Well done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-67428119818436232252013-06-30T10:24:40.954-07:002013-06-30T10:24:40.954-07:00wow...what an interesting tale...really like how y...wow...what an interesting tale...really like how you point out that because everyone else believed and said, she did as well so her actions build that belief too...yet when she came to the door he was there...nice verse...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-35992150669452866982013-06-30T06:12:58.252-07:002013-06-30T06:12:58.252-07:00Ohhh...I loved this. I didn't want her to be i...Ohhh...I loved this. I didn't want her to be insane...I wanted him to be a ghost...someone watching over her. But wait...maybe he is! TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-12802602762177672412013-06-30T06:07:07.358-07:002013-06-30T06:07:07.358-07:00Wow, you have woven an intriguing tale here. I wo...Wow, you have woven an intriguing tale here. I wondered, as the poem went on, whether or not she would open the door and what she would find. Your ending intrigued me. A strong, insightful write.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-90060144992241447112013-06-30T05:52:51.516-07:002013-06-30T05:52:51.516-07:00Thanks Buddah, when I started this poem, I didn...Thanks Buddah, when I started this poem, I didn't know where it was going, but it found its ending.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-49944527712712846012013-06-27T17:09:31.811-07:002013-06-27T17:09:31.811-07:00Very interesting - sometimes what we think is ther...Very interesting - sometimes what we think is there, really isn't. Fascinating like a room of mirrors.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com