tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post3883695681929163084..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: ReleaseKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-51769668797866843332012-02-10T03:16:19.536-08:002012-02-10T03:16:19.536-08:00Wishful thinking with which we can all identify. :...Wishful thinking with which we can all identify. :)Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-30214511859764750792012-02-09T02:56:53.278-08:002012-02-09T02:56:53.278-08:00Thanks for the comments, this is one of the poems ...Thanks for the comments, this is one of the poems that just flowed right after I started it and I had no idea where it was going until the end.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-34104594413512277752012-02-07T17:55:32.417-08:002012-02-07T17:55:32.417-08:00sometimes it seems we spend our whole lives lookin...sometimes it seems we spend our whole lives looking...<br /><br />great ending.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-90371967835732373682012-02-07T17:04:43.593-08:002012-02-07T17:04:43.593-08:00oh man...and we do try so hard at times it blinds ...oh man...and we do try so hard at times it blinds us to what it really is and it can feel so good to have almost that its hard to give up...nice capture...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-9472502427246722282012-02-07T14:31:23.735-08:002012-02-07T14:31:23.735-08:00ugh...reminded me of a love affair in my teenage y...ugh...reminded me of a love affair in my teenage years...magnetism..and gravity...but those kinds of relationship can quickly develop into black holes...and how to escape then..so better walk away before it's too late...and i agree with buddah..very well structured with the going back to where it started..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-71887842221981838902012-02-06T09:48:09.487-08:002012-02-06T09:48:09.487-08:00Liked how this builds then goes back to how it sta...Liked how this builds then goes back to how it started.<br /><br />Very good.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-70732909239163652522012-02-06T06:11:48.353-08:002012-02-06T06:11:48.353-08:00daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn.......
this is so DEEP.
Lo...daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn.......<br /><br />this is so DEEP.<br /><br />Love the one word questions...<br /><br />Could see the resolve to do what's best even tho it hurts...<br /><br />The last stanza...<br /><br />I won't look back<br />Because there is no<br />You,<br />Us,<br />We,<br />Just me trying to find<br />Love.<br /><br />WOW. Powerful ending...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.com