tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post3727169436121252412..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: HimKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-28515890342592766742012-09-14T14:33:39.449-07:002012-09-14T14:33:39.449-07:00Emotional turbulence told without melodrama. I lik...Emotional turbulence told without melodrama. I like when the emotion is deep inside the words and you have to climb down and in to get it.... and then you are left covered in the funk. Bravo. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01759199594367838304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-83784292270240402252012-09-10T16:43:51.205-07:002012-09-10T16:43:51.205-07:00Thanks for the feedback everyone, this poem as ins...Thanks for the feedback everyone, this poem as inspired by a book I read but in the book the main characters never cheated on their significant others, but their partners cheated on them. I know a lot of people view infidelity from the woman who has been wronged point of view and I thought it would be interesting to have the man who has been wronge tell his side.<br /><br />Thanks again for your thoughts.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-28271518994311674072012-09-05T12:01:28.921-07:002012-09-05T12:01:28.921-07:00him took a little while to learn.... didn't h...him took a little while to learn.... didn't him? Of course I'm joking. What goes on in a marriage is extremely personal. And beyond that life and philosophy evolves through time. Sex is only sex. Love is the heart. We tend to mix those two up when we're younger, I think. When I was 21 I thought I would be with that particular girlfriend forever, and if she had wanted sex with someone else I probably would have been hurt. But I haven't seen her now in over 30 years.... And now the only thing I think is that I hope she had some really good sex during that 30 year absence because I certainly did! I'm no worse the wear and definitely would not love her less for it now.... Really great write here!john Allen Richterhttp://johnallenrichter.wordpress.com/2012/08/24/edge-of-unspoken-dream/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-73739032893917843442012-09-05T05:12:33.969-07:002012-09-05T05:12:33.969-07:00A very deep and sad poem ~ filled with personal re...A very deep and sad poem ~ filled with personal regret ~ a great writeMike Sutcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-862235954268424602012-09-04T18:14:26.188-07:002012-09-04T18:14:26.188-07:00A sad but lovely tale ~ There is only so much we ...A sad but lovely tale ~ There is only so much we can take and forgive...so for him it was the last straw ~ Enjoyed the visit ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-71854709993083228482012-09-04T16:30:26.795-07:002012-09-04T16:30:26.795-07:00Rings true - though in my experience, this story ...Rings true - though in my experience, this story is usually reversed by gender..nevertheless I think the grief is long lasting either way.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-31041442241777786462012-09-04T14:56:15.872-07:002012-09-04T14:56:15.872-07:00A sad story, but very well told. A sad story, but very well told. Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/09/04/a-smile-a-look-a-touch/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-83301803626137551442012-09-04T14:43:23.702-07:002012-09-04T14:43:23.702-07:00crap...hard reality in this...it is hard afterward...crap...hard reality in this...it is hard afterward to trust you know...it hurts so bad the betrayal and it leaves lingering questions....ugh...i dont know that i could have don it either...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-76778251391879817982012-09-04T14:07:04.019-07:002012-09-04T14:07:04.019-07:00oh dang..that's tough...honest write and raw e...oh dang..that's tough...honest write and raw emotions in this...think at a certain point, it's just not possible to stay a minute longer...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-24207294803035869602012-09-04T14:00:30.863-07:002012-09-04T14:00:30.863-07:00Wow, wow, wow! I agree with what Mosk has said. ...Wow, wow, wow! I agree with what Mosk has said. You brought the husband and wife to life in your poem, told their story, made me feel, made me glad he finally did what he needed to do.....left her! Strong writing all the way through.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-36547411391525267112012-09-02T10:24:15.666-07:002012-09-02T10:24:15.666-07:00I am very honoured by your words and I feel the ex...I am very honoured by your words and I feel the exact same about your workKimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-52229600623554229512012-08-31T16:37:06.681-07:002012-08-31T16:37:06.681-07:00Kimolisa, You have a great command of the language...Kimolisa, You have a great command of the language of human relationships. You have a way of telling a whole lifetime in your carefully chosen details. I am always swept up into your words, and so happy to know you - and envious of your abilities. :) MoskowitzBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com