tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post2391675090895604238..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: UntitledKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-63060916202007763552012-06-22T03:51:14.186-07:002012-06-22T03:51:14.186-07:00Loved the unexpected twist. I'm not sure if th...Loved the unexpected twist. I'm not sure if this is a factual relation from your life, but regardless, I felt like you were just waiting for him to end it and you actually bore no love in your part. So why not end it yourself..?? Sooner even..??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-34078246662749690142012-05-25T20:23:27.589-07:002012-05-25T20:23:27.589-07:00OMG-- I was not expecting that take charge ending....OMG-- I was not expecting that take charge ending. Good for you! A diffficult scene very well crafted into a poem.Elaine Danforthhttp://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/05/15/the-one-called-mother/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-31754385024359164072012-05-17T22:05:54.079-07:002012-05-17T22:05:54.079-07:00brilliant write... i loved the ending the most :)brilliant write... i loved the ending the most :)Rajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.com