tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post2112125780285286103..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: UntitledKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-46480790259109797752012-12-05T13:49:30.212-08:002012-12-05T13:49:30.212-08:00real life... full of more drama than we can invent...real life... full of more drama than we can invent in our minds... and yet, here you did. Well done.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-79409847361848563132012-12-04T23:23:50.135-08:002012-12-04T23:23:50.135-08:00You have written the food chain as poetic even tho...You have written the food chain as poetic even though it is so cruel. Such is life...love it!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-80347881280904660592012-12-04T21:37:42.393-08:002012-12-04T21:37:42.393-08:00I really like your rendering of the food chain, an...I really like your rendering of the food chain, and the randomness of fate, which may apply to any living creature. You brought the environment to life in my mind's eye. If I may make one suggestion, I would say lose the word "venomous" - it is an unnecessary adjective, and removes the impact from the word 'snake'.<br />Thank you for sharing on Real Toads. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-40649105126054461902012-12-04T18:02:00.580-08:002012-12-04T18:02:00.580-08:00Life can be so cruel! Everything eats. Life can be so cruel! Everything eats. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-3718841990732958842012-12-04T15:15:48.810-08:002012-12-04T15:15:48.810-08:00goodness..you spun some amazing imagery...and whil...goodness..you spun some amazing imagery...and while there are predators at every turn...is it in this case not just nature? smiles...really in the moment writing too...like it much...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-5151773123720650762012-12-04T14:48:21.407-08:002012-12-04T14:48:21.407-08:00Wow. This is the best poem I've read in a long...Wow. This is the best poem I've read in a long time. The extended metaphor is truly great. There is so much being communicated here. One read could never do this poem justice.Jessica Lynn Langhttp://www.ambrielrev.com/pushed-by-light-pulled-by-dark/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-79115939649661328642012-12-04T14:09:56.912-08:002012-12-04T14:09:56.912-08:00So vivid... the food chain at work.So vivid... the food chain at work.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-15391790689032602532012-12-04T13:52:28.411-08:002012-12-04T13:52:28.411-08:00It amazing to me how a simple turn to the left or ...It amazing to me how a simple turn to the left or fight can have such impact on the eventual outcome and I think you capture that perfectly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-81007927693262621362012-12-04T13:35:43.692-08:002012-12-04T13:35:43.692-08:00You captured nature at play for sure, as the prey ...You captured nature at play for sure, as the prey and hunted go around the circle of life.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-87724763033070893672012-12-04T10:50:16.879-08:002012-12-04T10:50:16.879-08:00Wow, this was cinematic! Excellent! (and I'm...Wow, this was cinematic! Excellent! (and I'm still getting to your interview - haven't forgotten.)Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com