tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post2062988098464942469..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: In The Jewel BoxKimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-79888609248097052732012-01-01T08:22:55.697-08:002012-01-01T08:22:55.697-08:00Yeah such pain should not be locked away in jewele...Yeah such pain should not be locked away in jeweled boxes. They should be allowed t0o dissolve. <br />I loved it, especially the last stanza :)<br /><br />My entry:<br /><br />http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07174562168503272243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-7584032485954629562011-12-31T18:31:46.224-08:002011-12-31T18:31:46.224-08:00magical experience, wow.
Happy New Year.magical experience, wow.<br /><br />Happy New Year.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-16390662658996786682011-12-31T02:09:18.428-08:002011-12-31T02:09:18.428-08:00Thank you for opening the boxThank you for opening the boxWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-33562518331565789032011-12-30T04:11:00.946-08:002011-12-30T04:11:00.946-08:00nostalgic and wistful, with a hint of hope at the ...nostalgic and wistful, with a hint of hope at the end to rescue it from being morbid. Nicely done! Here's my offering this week:<br />http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/drafting-the-clock-strikes-inspiration/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-9905079345831528872011-12-29T05:20:24.796-08:002011-12-29T05:20:24.796-08:00so sad...whispers of love thrown away. thanks for ...so sad...whispers of love thrown away. thanks for sharing...Jeannette,https://www.blogger.com/profile/05458779737807500942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-67176029284119892152011-12-29T04:45:38.326-08:002011-12-29T04:45:38.326-08:00Thank you all for the kind words, the feedback is ...Thank you all for the kind words, the feedback is very helpful.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-15821628693651177002011-12-29T04:32:05.801-08:002011-12-29T04:32:05.801-08:00It was sad. I guess he left on a bad note? Else th...It was sad. I guess he left on a bad note? Else the jewel box would be a good keepsake for remembrance.<br /><br />I loved the way the suspense was built up towards the end. Excellent piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-87348560307420807942011-12-29T02:06:31.255-08:002011-12-29T02:06:31.255-08:00When sadness ends, happiness shall come. :) Beauti...When sadness ends, happiness shall come. :) Beautifully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-61429457218551935852011-12-28T18:19:09.490-08:002011-12-28T18:19:09.490-08:00so magical and profound!
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http://untitledmomen...so magical and profound!<br /><br />~L<br /><br />http://untitledmoments.com/2011/12/23/i-am-many-free-write-friday/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-39917443528229988482011-12-28T15:42:33.961-08:002011-12-28T15:42:33.961-08:00hmmm what a read, a journey within a journey, pret...hmmm what a read, a journey within a journey, pretty and filled with hope :)<br />happy rally!!<br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-16437637431062052042011-12-28T15:40:56.382-08:002011-12-28T15:40:56.382-08:00whispers in a jewel box, interesting.
love the vi...whispers in a jewel box, interesting.<br /><br />love the vivid imagery and powerful motions on it.<br />well done.<br /><br />Happy Rally.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-13183353849014630362011-12-28T13:13:53.384-08:002011-12-28T13:13:53.384-08:00i was drawn in to this from the first line - great...i was drawn in to this from the first line - great work<br />http://jobryantnz.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/x-is-for-xanthippe/Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-22013925141880093962011-12-28T12:56:35.450-08:002011-12-28T12:56:35.450-08:00I could hear the whisperings and the rustles as th...I could hear the whisperings and the rustles as they were set free. The poem is atmospheric and has subdued power.Harry Nicholsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16801422418560281658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-75116652596158505352011-12-28T12:27:57.605-08:002011-12-28T12:27:57.605-08:00I love the way you tend to end your poems on a hop...I love the way you tend to end your poems on a hopeful positive note. This one was terribly sad, but you lifted it up at the end. I like it!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-33168904207836979702011-12-28T12:13:11.324-08:002011-12-28T12:13:11.324-08:00this poem was beautiful. great portrayal of exact ...this poem was beautiful. great portrayal of exact emotion of finding an old jewelry box :DSomeonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14397953670088381932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-56340925025215930502011-12-28T11:56:45.921-08:002011-12-28T11:56:45.921-08:00It truly touched me. Thanks for sharing.It truly touched me. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-14356934449574730882011-12-28T11:11:56.818-08:002011-12-28T11:11:56.818-08:00Beautiful! Hauntingly so, but still beautiful. B...Beautiful! Hauntingly so, but still beautiful. Blessings and happy new year, TerriTeresa Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11224853952214903621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-77320088605956616602011-12-28T10:43:25.563-08:002011-12-28T10:43:25.563-08:00Lovely and sad story. Reminds me a bit of the '...Lovely and sad story. Reminds me a bit of the 'Titanic' movie...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-92197012090430753802011-11-30T02:34:07.579-08:002011-11-30T02:34:07.579-08:00Enjoyed reading this!Enjoyed reading this!nIxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18297864128487043243noreply@blogger.com