tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post1612938000097220172..comments2023-10-02T08:44:14.460-07:00Comments on Kim or Lisa: Incomplete....Kimolisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-89934133568783697742015-08-24T08:33:44.068-07:002015-08-24T08:33:44.068-07:00Even if you say its incomplete it doesn't feel...Even if you say its incomplete it doesn't feel that way. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-37730712186119844612015-08-24T05:01:19.516-07:002015-08-24T05:01:19.516-07:00perfect...perfect...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-19992421207267937892015-08-24T00:29:53.341-07:002015-08-24T00:29:53.341-07:00I find it really beautiful.I find it really beautiful.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-26576541655226161912015-08-23T19:08:39.682-07:002015-08-23T19:08:39.682-07:00Love the ending and it feels complete to me the wa...Love the ending and it feels complete to me the way it is. Divine actually.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-61215286542866612072015-08-23T14:05:17.630-07:002015-08-23T14:05:17.630-07:00Really excellent, a far as you have gone. I reall...Really excellent, a far as you have gone. I really get a sense of 'him' from your writing; and if more comes, fine. If not, you've done well anyway!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-24346839329933800122015-08-23T13:03:24.703-07:002015-08-23T13:03:24.703-07:00I agree it is complete...and if not then it will c...I agree it is complete...and if not then it will come in time...Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-36647413580987841392015-08-23T12:47:22.505-07:002015-08-23T12:47:22.505-07:00you shoul repost if you ever go further with this....you shoul repost if you ever go further with this. Quite a nice poem as is<br /><br />have a wonderful Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-2112577484757061792015-08-23T12:42:22.124-07:002015-08-23T12:42:22.124-07:00Hope you complete it soon.. I must know what happe...Hope you complete it soon.. I must know what happened next!!<br />Brilliant piece.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-4969142282908776862015-08-23T11:44:37.743-07:002015-08-23T11:44:37.743-07:00I think this poem is complete. The closing lines a...I think this poem is complete. The closing lines are perfect.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-46813250899800881872015-08-23T11:35:22.168-07:002015-08-23T11:35:22.168-07:00I think you don't need to add anything.. the a...I think you don't need to add anything.. the ambiguity in the end is just perfect.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-89734253729773179322015-07-16T08:24:18.129-07:002015-07-16T08:24:18.129-07:00Still I seek
To be the child
Of the sun.
Very wel...Still I seek<br />To be the child<br />Of the sun.<br /><br />Very well articulated Kimorlisa! One happy to rejoice if nothing had gone wrong. But there are elements who intrude with obstacles! Great ending!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2617069594261001276.post-73506155967275493492015-07-14T14:19:54.244-07:002015-07-14T14:19:54.244-07:00You know, it's perfect as is. Don't force ...You know, it's perfect as is. Don't force it. It's a beautiful snapshot. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com